if this
is truely your first attempt... not bad...
i didnt like the in between things for each part... the one where the aqlex thing vaperized... took too long and bored me...
i liked the first one the best tho... the one where you introduced your flash.. that one in my eyes was the best...
you prolly made that one last...
id practice ALOT more... and submitt other stuff... maybe even join yourself to a productions crew before trying to start my own...
practice makes perfect!!!