Wheatees's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[SMB: Rocket Science!]

its strange...

i dont really enjoy sprites...

but i enjoyed this flash...
i laughed when the yoshee egg pressed the button and was like
"fuck"

haha...

all in all... a great flash with great sound and what not!!

[Misc Stuff]

surprising..

i expected this to be one of those lame noob animation montages...
but i thoroughly enjoyed this... it was pretty cool...

you should really finish some of them cuz they would really score pretty high on here...

[My first flash by Ryan]

for bein your first flash...

it was actually really good...
i enjoyed it... it would have been funnier if you built the story alittle more...
like showed the reason he was buying the staff... maybe he got mugged and he wants to protect himself...

i saw some unprocessed humor inthere... if you refined it it could be funny...
the charictors were good and so was the animations...

all in all... good job...

[log on]

that was pretty cool

would have been cool if the animations were alittle more fluid and smooth...
but thats acceptable...
it would be cool to see more color... and maybe more of a story... but they style was awesome..
5 for style...

[My First Flash Animations]

if this

is truely your first attempt... not bad...

i didnt like the in between things for each part... the one where the aqlex thing vaperized... took too long and bored me...
i liked the first one the best tho... the one where you introduced your flash.. that one in my eyes was the best...
you prolly made that one last...

id practice ALOT more... and submitt other stuff... maybe even join yourself to a productions crew before trying to start my own...

practice makes perfect!!!

Aqlex responds:

Yeah I realized that the inbetween animation was a little lengthy. Thanks for telling me, I will make sure to keep them shorter.

[ani-practice]

hmms

i really liked the backgrounds... it was... in my eyes... better then the animation...

i did like the animation tho...
smooth... and shows promise...
id venture away from the stick figures...
and go to full body... see how it goes...

3 for the back ground
2 for the animation!

[a robot plants a tree]

tho it was kinda short`

i loved the style... and i think you could do alot of awesome work with that style...

do more with the robot even...
im not talkin about a series or anything... but...
eh...
maybe a series would be cool... idk...

8 for style...

[Journey Act 1]

i dont know

why people post unfinished projects... they should be finished... and you have to be patient untill it is done... i like the style and the way it was going... but if you were looking for opinions you should try an uploading site and the BBS... they do a good job with that kinda thing...

the god thing for you is this passed with a pretty decent score... but i would like to see more done with it!!!